Blog Feedback

By Kevin Le, Charlie Quane | 11/16/2023

One of the key ideas of the feedback is to make the posts more concise while expanding more on some of the W’s. Another key idea from the feedback is to proofread the blog posts to eliminate grammatical errors. As a group, we did well on addressing the W’s but could work more on expanding on the why, when, and how of the story in our blog posts. As for the web design of our blog, we can improve the formatting of our blog posts to make the blog more visually appealing and reader-friendly. The blog does well on grammar and punctuation in the posts but needs further proofreading to ensure that there are no grammatical errors in any of the blog posts. We edited the blog's formatting for revision so that each post was in its own section. We also removed most grammatical and punctuation errors in the blog posts. Overall, readers enjoyed our story format but wanted the posts to be their own individual stories.